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 This is my favorite song.
-It's a movie I made very early on, and there are a lot of things I want to fix, but I'm still pretty happy with it. By the way, the worst part for me is that the guy is staring out the window, even though he is probably inside a subway car, judging from the darkness and light outside the window!! And for quite a long time, too. W-What in the world are you looking at...?
+I made this movie very early on, and there are a lot of things I want to fix, but I'm still pretty happy with it. By the way, the worst part for me is that guy staring out the window, even though he's likely inside a subway car, judging from the darkness and light outside the window!! And for quite a long time, too. What in the world are you looking at...?
-I would be quite uncomfortable if I were seeing things that normal people don't see.
+I wouldn't like it very much if I were seeing things that normal people don't see.
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