Shiawase no katachi: Difference between revisions

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 さよならをひとつひとつに　願いをさむ
-それぞれの夜漕ぎをへて
+それぞれの夜漕ぎをへて  先に
-* (...をへて) 先に
+* 手のひらに在る　立ち並んで
-  手のひらに在る　立ち並んで
    ゆらり　のぼり雨
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 さざ波の音にあわせて消えていく
-降り注ぐものと心通わせて</pre>
+降り注ぐものと心通わせ</pre>
 ==== Romaji ====
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 oto hibiki motatezu kuzurete shimau
-kono gareki no saki ni wa
+gareki no saki ni wa
 nanika aru no kana
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 hajikete nokoru wo aogu
 sayonara wo hitotsu hitotsu ni negai wo samu
-sorezore no yoru kogi wo hete
+sorezore no yoru kogi wo hete sakini
-*  (...wo hete) sakini
+* tenohira ni aru tachinaran de
-  tenohira ni aru tachinaran de
    yurari nobori ame
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 sazanami no oto ni awasete kiete iku
-furisosogu mono to kokoro kayo wasete</pre>
+furisosogu mono to kokoro kayo wase</pre>
 === Long Version ===