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 By [[Reo Nagumo]]:
-It's the one that the arrangements and lyrics of the tune exists in the key ring prize machine "Primucho of Can Movement" were mentioned.
+It's the one in which the arrangements and lyrics of the tune are the same as the ones in the key ring prize machine "Primucho of Can Movement".
-An acoustic guitar was piled up to a lovely dovey vocal voice, and obtaining that voice. Kiyo's imaged was pop.
+An acoustic guitar was piled up to a lovely dovey vocal voice, and obtaining said voice. Kiyo's image was that of pops.
-SGI of SGI&REO takes charge of the vocals and lyrics, and I (REO) make the tune.
+SGI of SGI&REO takes charge of the vocals and lyrics, and I (REO) made the tune.
-The live playing and  talking is done, and he acts variously in appearance to the music etc. etc, though SGI is the Parcasshonist* behind the song.
+The recording is done, and he acts variously in appearance to the music etc. etc, but SGI is the Parcasshonist* behind the song.
 He is likely to visit your town shortly.